Newsgroups: alt.startrek.creative Path: newserv.ksu.ksu.edu!moe.ksu.ksu.edu!vixen.cso.uiuc.edu!howland.reston.ans.net!darwin.sura.net!hearst.acc.Virginia.EDU!ruacad!rucs!sratliff From: sratliff@rucs2.sunlab.cs.runet.edu (Stephen Ratliff) Subject: TNG _Enterprized_ part 1 Message-ID: Organization: Radford University X-Newsreader: TIN [version 1.2 PL0] Date: Mon, 29 Nov 1993 14:50:37 GMT Lines: 58 This is a next Generation story All spelling errors are to be ingored Written by Stephen Ratliff Comments welcome ______________________________________________________________ E N T E R P R I Z E D by Stephen Ratliff ______________________________________________________________ PROLOGUE "Evasive Maneuvers, fire phasers, LT. Yarr," Lueitenant Richard Casteel said as three romulan warbirds sircled the Enterprise-C casually firing on it. The Romulans soon took the Enterprise seriously as it destoryed a warbird. The responce was quick. "Lieutenant sheilds are down and phasers are at 10%," Yar informed her comanding officer. As she completed her comment she noticed something else. "Romulan transporters are active." "Get those sheilds up, Now!" Casteel orderd. "Enginneering reports that they are unable to do so," an ensign said. "Sir, Romulans are in enginneering," Yarr exclaimed. Suddenly five romulans materailized on the bridge. "The subcommander in charge said, "Surrender or die." Lieutenant Casteel got up from his seat and said, "Never." He reached for his phaser. He never touched it as the subcommander vaporized him. "Any more takers for death?" Chapter One Captains Log STARDATE 47567.25 The Enterprise has be ordered on a interesting mission. We will be time travelling to resuce the Enterprise C from Romulus. In order to inprove our chances I ame taking the inventor of a cloaking device on board. "Captain the USS Galaxy has signaled that the inventor is ready to beam aboard." Worf said. "Number One, Counselor," Picard said as he got up from his comfortable chair. "Dr. Chrusher, LaForge report to transporter room 3," Picard said after tapping his commicator. "What did Admiral Edwards not withhold about our inventor," Picard asked. "He is young and secretive," Troi said. "Anything I don't know?" "I guess not." The threesome left the turbolift and proceed to the transporter room. Apon entering The room Geodi informed them, "Docter Chursher will be a late. She said to go ahead with out her." "Beam him aboard then" ------------------------CUT-HERE-------------------------------- Part Two to be sent Wednesday December 1 Stephen Ratliff at Radford U. Computer Science Major. Newsgroups: alt.startrek.creative Path: newserv.ksu.ksu.edu!moe.ksu.ksu.edu!vixen.cso.uiuc.edu!howland.reston.ans.net!darwin.sura.net!hearst.acc.Virginia.EDU!ruacad!rucs!sratliff From: sratliff@rucs2.sunlab.cs.runet.edu (Stephen Ratliff) Subject: TNG Enterprized part 2 Message-ID: Organization: Radford University X-Newsreader: TIN [version 1.2 PL0] Date: Wed, 1 Dec 1993 14:54:14 GMT Lines: 80 This is a Next Generation story. Spell checker is down. Written by Stephen Ratliff Comments welcome ----------------------------------------------------------- E N T E R P R I Z E D ..............................................part 2....... Chapter 1 on cont. Westly Chrusher materized on the transporter disk. "Hi," He said. After noting some surprised looks around the room, he said, "You did ask for the inventor of a cloaking device or did I take the wrong ship?" "I beleive we did," Riker said. "Right Captain?" "I seem the recall doing so," Picard confirmed. "Why the secretcy Wes," Geordi asked as he came around the console to greet Westly. "How else can I surprise my mom?" Wes asked. As Westly completed the sentence, Dr Chrusher entered the room. "Hi Mom," Westly said. Dr Chrusher fainted into Picard's arms who lowed her to the floor. "I didn't think I'd surprise her that much," Westly said. Picard looked around and ordered, "Number One, take the Docter to Sickbay. The rest of us will get ready for the 0800 mission briefing." The Crew was seated around the table in the observation lounge. Westly Chrusher, however was standing by the viewscreen "This device will cloak all the ship but the forward 8 meters of the saucer section." Westly said. "So we should leave the saucer section behind. It will However cover the Enterprise-C with room to spare." "That means we will need some one to crew the saucer section and we don't have crew to spare," Picard said . "Suggestions?" "We could use the kid's crew," Westly suggested. "Kid's crew," Riker said, "who's idea was that?" "Marrissa Flores," Westly said. "She formed it after she was trapped in the turbo lift with Captain Picard." "I know young Marrissa," Picard said, "but I refuse to put children at risk." "What was you _Kobayshi_Maru_ time Captain," Westly asked. "15 minutes but I don't see how that helps out," Picard said. "Marrissa's is 20," Westly replied. "20 minutes my time was 13," Riker said. "Mine was 14:03.467879," Data said. "We should make sure this young lady gets into Starfleet Academy," Picard said. "The Kid's crew gets a go-ahead. How long before Engineering is ready for this mission?" "12 Hours, Captain," Geordi said. "Saucer separation will occur at 2300 hours," Picard said. "We depart for Romulus via timetravel at 0100 hours. Meeting adjourned." Chapter 2 ^^^^^^^^^ Captain Picard was drinking a cup of earl gray tea when Marrissa Floras arrived. "Come," He said when she rang his doorbell Marrissa came in and sat down. "I called you here be cause you might be able to solve a small personal promblem I have," Picard said. "How small?" Marrissa asked. "Saucer section command crew," Picard informed. "And why me?" "Your 20 mintute _Kobayshi_Maru_ time." "You are out of date. It's 21:32 now." "I would like to know your command crew if possible" "Jay Gordan for first officer, Clarrissa Sutter, Chief Engineer, and Alexander for Chief of security. I'll have to review a little to find the best for the rest." "You start at 1800 hours." Picard said. Marrissa skipped out of the room and into the aft turbolift. ===========================Cut=Here================================= Stephen Ratliff at Radford U. Newsgroups: alt.startrek.creative Path: newserv.ksu.ksu.edu!moe.ksu.ksu.edu!vixen.cso.uiuc.edu!howland.reston.ans.net!europa.eng.gtefsd.com!darwin.sura.net!hearst.acc.Virginia.EDU!ruacad!rucs!sratliff From: sratliff@rucs2.sunlab.cs.runet.edu (Stephen Ratliff) Subject: TNG Enterprized part 3 Message-ID: Organization: Radford University X-Newsreader: TIN [version 1.2 PL0] Date: Mon, 6 Dec 1993 16:56:55 GMT Lines: 96 ==================================================================== E N T E R P R I Z E D by Stephen Ratliff ---------------------------------------------part 3----------------- Chapter 2 Cont. Marrissa and 4 other children entered the bridge a few minutes before 1600 hours. Captain Picard was there along with Beta Shift. "Ah, Marrissa right on time," Picard said. "I assum this is your bridge crew." "Correct," Marrissa said and sensing that he wanted interductions, "Jay Gordan Craig who will act as my first officer. Clara Sutter, my chief Enginneer who will leave for saucer engineering in an hour. Alexander, Chief of Security; Patterson Supra, helmsman; and Ro Narys science and ops; round out my Alpha shift. Jay also takes command of Beta Shift, and Clara of Gamma. Alpha wil be on duty till 0100 gamma till 0900 and normal rotation there after." "It seems you have every thing fingured out," Picard said "You and your crew have the bridge." Picard and the Beta shift left the bridge. As Alexander took over Tactical from his father (who normal commands Beta shift), He noticed a vessel crossing the Neurtal Zone. "Captain, a vessel is crossing the Romulan Neurtral Zone," Alexander said. "It is shuttle craft size and unarmed. It is on an intercept coarse." "Hail them, Notify Captain Picard," Marrissa said. "Incoming Message," Alexander said "On Screen," Marrissa said in her best Picard imtation. Spock appeared. "This is Marrissa Floras Captain of the U.S.S Enterprise's Kid's Crew. How may I be of assitance?" "I am Ambassidor Spock," Spock replied. "Permission to land in your shuttlebay." Finally noticing the fact that only children were on the the bridge he asked, "What are you doing on the bridge? I thought Captain Picard did allow children on the bridge." "Commanding the saucer section," Marrissa said. She consulted her PADD and said, "Land in shuttlebay 2. Mr Alexander will guild you in. Mr. Data will meet you on arrival. Enterprise out." Spock stepped out of his shuttle to meet Data. "Mr. Data why are children in command of the bridge?" "We are unable to cloak with the saucer section attached," Data said. "Also the regular crew is need for are mission to resucue the Enterprise-C. Westley Crusher suggested that the kids now in command of the bridge could do the job. The Girl in command has a 20 minute Kobayshi Maru time." "Logical." The two science officers porceeded to the battle bridge. Spock entered the battle bridge ready room. "Captain, I Have new information on the Enterprise-C." he said. "Also I have found out what happened to Tasha Yarr." "Good," Picard said "Lets start with the Enterprise-C" "The Enterprise-C was fully repared and ready to enbark on a spy mission for the Romulan Empire," Spock said. "It mystriosly warped out of orbit. I was unable to find the exact STARDATE but it was some 5 years after its disappearance not before STARDATE 35070." "And Yarr" "She disappeard in a Federation Transporter Beam a day after the Enterprise-C. I have the coordinates ot the mystrious disappearance." "Give them to the transporter chief." At 2340 the Gamma Shift crew enter the battle bridge to join Captain Picard. As Picard sat down Marrissa informed him from the Main bridge, "Saucer section ready. All personal who are going with you are in your section." "Thank you Marrissa," Picard said. "Seal all connecting cooridors and turbolifts, Mr Data." "All Turbolifts cleat," Data said. "Corridors and turbolifts have been sealed, Captain." "Released docking latches." "Docking latches released." "Marrissa set a coarse 120 mark 90," Picard said. "Engage." the Enterprise Split appart. "We are clear of the saucer," Data said. "Captain I'll see you at DS9," Marrissa said over the intercom. "Saucer out." ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Sorry I'M late. Excuse My liberal inclusion of charactor Note the following as source of charactors Diasater Marrissa Floras Jay Gordan Craig Patterson Supra Imaginary Friend Clara Sutter Alexander > any Worf Episode after season 5? Next posting some time this week Stephen Ratliff at Radford U. ANYTHING CAN AND WILL HAPPEN. Newsgroups: alt.startrek.creative Path: newserv.ksu.ksu.edu!moe.ksu.ksu.edu!vixen.cso.uiuc.edu!howland.reston.ans.net!europa.eng.gtefsd.com!uunet!hearst.acc.Virginia.EDU!ruacad!rucs!sratliff From: sratliff@rucs2.sunlab.cs.runet.edu (Stephen Ratliff) Subject: TNG Enterprized part 4 Message-ID: Organization: Radford University X-Newsreader: TIN [version 1.2 PL0] Date: Tue, 7 Dec 1993 00:24:24 GMT Lines: 55 I got on a roll here is part 4 ======================================================================= E N T E R P R I Z E D by Stephen Ratliff -----------------------------------------------------part 4---------- Chapter Three ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Captain's Log Supplemental We have initiated saucer seperation and are traveling toward the neurtal zone. I have left Marrissa Floras in charge of the saucer section with orders to proceed to DS9. We are about to time travel back to retrive the Enterprise-C. Westley Crusher entered and sat down at one of the battle bridge's aft stations. "Captain cloaking device has been installed. We can time travel cloaked." "Engage Cloaking Device," Picard order. THe Enterprise shimmered and disappeared. "Excute Slingshot maneuver," THe ship went into warp around a nearby star. The out lines of a galaxy class ship appeared for a moment and was gone. Suddenly the Enterprise stopped. Picard asked," Mr Data, Crurrent STARDATE?" "37568.1993," Data replied. "Set a coarse for Romulas, Ensign Ro," Picard said. "Data you have the bridge." ...Any more takers for death" the Romulan subcomander said. Tasha Yarr woke up with a start. She went into her daughters room and stroked Sela's long blond hair. :I can't let her grow up on Romulas. I can't stand it myself. Its worse than where I grew up: She thought. :Maybe I can get the shuttlecraft working: At 0100 hours Marrissa left the bridge in Clara's hands. As she walked to her quarters, she wondered; Do I have the ablity to sucessfully get this ship though a battle if nessary? Do I ... As the Stardrive section that entered Romulan orbit, cloaked of coarse. Worf called out," I have located the Enterprise-C." "On screen," Picard said. The Enterprise-C appeared on the screen. It appears to be freshly painted. Its warp engines glowed. "Worf, how many people are on board." "15 total," Worf replied. "3 on the bridge, 1 in transproter room 2, 2 in sickbay, and 9 in engineering." "Ready boarding parties, Number one," Picard said. ------------------------------------------------------------------ Part 5 will be posted within 5 days. Comments welcome Stephen Ratliff at Radford U. email : sratliff@rucs2.sunlab.cs.runet.edu Newsgroups: alt.startrek.creative Path: newserv.ksu.ksu.edu!moe.ksu.ksu.edu!hobbes.physics.uiowa.edu!math.ohio-state.edu!howland.reston.ans.net!europa.eng.gtefsd.com!uunet!hearst.acc.Virginia.EDU!ruacad!rucs!sratliff From: sratliff@rucs2.sunlab.cs.runet.edu (Stephen Ratliff) Subject: TNG Enterprized part 5 Message-ID: Organization: Radford University X-Newsreader: TIN [version 1.2 PL0] Date: Thu, 9 Dec 1993 19:42:22 GMT Lines: 79 Sorry about the delay Radford University computers ate my first try on this part. ======================================================================= E N T E R P R I Z E D by Stephen Ratliff -------------------------------------------------------part 5---------- Chapter Four ^^^^^^^^^^^^ Captain's Log Stardate 37569.6 Having asembled all that we can of the cloaking device for the Enterprise-C, we are about to board the older Enterprise. Worf, Westley, Geodi, Lts. Floras and Barckay, and another security officer beamed into enginneering. As soon as Worf matterized with his phaser ready he said, "Put your hands up." One romulan was not cooperitive. His Disrupter vaporized Lt. Floras. The remainer of the boarding party stunned the nine romulan enginneers into cooperation. Meanwhile on the bridge of the Enterprise-C, Riker and five security officers beamed in. Riker's team lost one officer, an Ensign Floras, when the Romulan commanding officer (the same officer who killed Casteel) fired on his team. However, Riker's team prevailed. As the others took up their assignments Doctors Crusher and Gavar, took out the two in SickBay with their hyposprays and a little percesion transprort beaming. Data took over the transporter room in a simmalar fassion only he used a Vulcan Nick Pinch. "Riker to Boarding parties" "La Forge, Enginneering secure. One death, Lt Floras. The ship seems to be in good repair." "His wife doed as well," Riker said. "Data?" "Transporter Room secure," Data said. "No problems." "Dr. Crusher?" Riker inquired. "Sickbay secure," Crusher said. "La Forge, Data, and Crusher," Riker order, "Beam over to the Enterprise-D with your prisoners. Riker out. Riker to Enterprise-D." "Picard here, how did it go Will." "The ship is secure you may beam over my crew," Riker said. "Two deaths, Lt and Ensign Floras." "You get to inform Marrissa Commander Riker," Picard said. "I'm not looking forward to it," Riker said. "Riker out." Cheif Engineer's Log USS Enterprise NCC-1701-C Lieutenant Reginald Barclay III recording We have spent the past four hours installing the cloaking device and are now seaching for tracking devices. "Here is another one, Lieutenant," Westley said as the two crawled down a jefferies tube. "Thats the 508th one we've found," Barclay said. "The Romulans are sure into overkill." That very morning Tasha and Sela went for a walk. It was a beutiful morning, the romulan version of birds were singing and the flowers were in bloom. Tasha turned into a cave. At the back of the yellow cave was a shuttle craft. It bore the inscription NCC-1701-C USS Enterprise. "What is this mother," Sela asked. "A shuttle from my last post in the faederation fleet," her mother replied. ------------------------------------------end part 5------------------- Part 6 may come tommarrow. if not it will be posted in the 2nd week of January. Authors Note: Lt. and Ensign Floras are Marrissa's parents. now taking suggestions on foster or adoptive parents. Suggestions will be taken intill 1-11-94. I wil not be on the net between 12-16-93 and 1-09-94. Stephen Ratlif at Radford U. email : sratliff@rucs3.sunlab.cs.runet.edu Next part : Romulan detechtion and Cardassian battle. Newsgroups: alt.startrek.creative Path: newserv.ksu.ksu.edu!moe.ksu.ksu.edu!vixen.cso.uiuc.edu!howland.reston.ans.net!europa.eng.gtefsd.com!uunet!hearst.acc.Virginia.EDU!ruacad!rucs!sratliff From: sratliff@rucs2.sunlab.cs.runet.edu (Stephen Ratliff) Subject: TNG Enterprized part 6 Message-ID: Organization: Radford University X-Newsreader: TIN [version 1.2 PL0] Date: Fri, 10 Dec 1993 17:42:31 GMT Lines: 134 This Post will be reposte when I get back from Winter Break ================================================================== E N T E R P R I Z E D by Stephen Ratliff ---------------------------------------------------part 6--------- Chapter Five ^^^^^^^^^^^^ Captain's Log STARDATE 37570.2 USS Enterprise NCC-1701-C Commander William T. Riker recording The Enterprise is now ready to go as all staff is on board. Note crew list {Apendix attached to part}. "Commander two Romulan warbird are on an intercept coarse with us," Worf said. ":There weapons are charging.~ "Looks like we have been discovered," Riker said. "Inform the Enterprise-D. Westley Crusher, to the bridge." "Captain Picard is hailing us," Worf said. "On Screen," Riker said. "What seems to be the Problem, Will," "Two unfriendly Romulan Warbirds," Riker said. "Lead them out of the system." Picard orded. "Then lose them with your cloaking device. Picard out." Westley Crusher arrived on the brigde. "Take helm, Wes," Riker said. "Plot a coarse 134 mark 179, full impluse. Warp when we clear the system. And keep us ahead of them and away from their shots." The Enterprise shot out of orbit. Roulan warbird followed out it like sharks after a bloody fish. The gained on the Enterprise as it left the system. They opened fire but Wes made aquick evasive manuaveur and went into warp. The Romulans started to gain on the Enterprise agian as she passed warp 4. Westly was visablely sweating. When Riker noticed this he said," Go to warp 8. Worf cloak us in 30 secords." The Enterprise shot forward. The Romulans increased speed. However the Enterrprise-C disappeared from ther sensors. "Marrissa to the bridge. RED ALERT. Marrissa to the bridge." The alarm woke Marrissa she jumped in to her boots (She slept in her unform) and ran to the waiting turbolift. "Bridge," She ordered. As the trubolift sped to its destination, she wondered what was goning on to call Red Alert deep inside Federation space. The Turbolift doors opened. On screen was a Cardassian warship. "What's going on." "The Cardassian captian opened commication with a phaser bolt," Clara said. "Then asked for us to surrender. I told him I had to get the Commanding officer. He is waiting for you reply." "Open a Channel," Captain Marrissa Floras said. Gul Ducat appeared on screen. "This is Captain Marrissa Floras of the Federation starship Enterprise. Why do you want us to surrender," Maarrissa said confededently. "In fact why are you 56.1 Parsec from the nearest Carrdassain Space and 50 parces inside federation space?" "Why do I what you to surender," Gul Ducet said. "You are a bunch of kids no kids should ever command a starship. And I'm here to attack Earth." "I can see that you better aplogies for you insults and leave Federation Space," Marrissa said. "You can start with the treat to attack earth. Then the incursion on Federation Space and ending with that comment concerning my crew." "Why should I apoligies to a child," Gul Ducet sneered. As the Gul concluded he cut off commacations and opened fire. "Mr Alexander return the favor," Marrissa ordered. "Mr Supra evasive pattern Mozart Jupiter. Clara, prepare to match ore shields to the Cardassians." The Saucer section movered about evading the Cardassian ships fire by as much as 20 meters. Gul Ducet began to get mad at his weapons officer. "Patterson take us in to the dorsal side of the Cardassian ship," Marissa ordered. "Change evassive to Morning. Clara match Cardassian shields." "Sheilds matched," Clara said as they neaared the cardassian ship. "Their sheild engery is begining to follow to coarse of ours." "Alexander fire ventral pahsers," Marrissa ordered. "Target tropedos on their only phaser bay." The Enterprise hit the Cardassian ship hard knocking out the engins and wepons. The Sheild remainded up but they containd both ships. The Cardasian ship was unable to respond in any more. "Alexander set phasers for light hull scoring," Marrissa ordered. "End all other firing and inscribe 'I lost to a bunch of kids' on the hull. Open a channel when you are done." After a moment Gul Ducet appeared on the screen. "I surrender." he said. Captain's Log STARDATE 47072.1 USS Enterprise saucer section Marrissa Floras recording. Captain Morris and the Arizona have aarrived to take the Cardassian ship to it`s space by way of Deep Space Nine. We have resumed coarse and wil arrive about 2 hours ahead of them. -------------------------------------------------------------------- Part 7 will be posted inthe 2nd or 3rd week of Januaary. This Part will be reposted as soon as I get back from Winter Break. Apendix A Enterprise-C Crew Commanding Officer CMD William T. Riker First Officer CPT Spock Tactical LT. Worf Chief Engineeer LT. Reginald Barclay III Helm Westly Crusher Apendix B Enterprise saucer section crew Commanding officer Marrissa Floras First Officer Jay Gordan Craig Chief Engineer Clara Sutter Helm Patterson Supra OPs and Science Ro Narys Tractical Alaxander Looking for Foster or adoptive parents for Marrissa Presnt sugestions inculde votes Choice 11 Picard 5 Riker 2 Worf 1 La Forge 1 Troi (with Riker) 1 Crusher New names to rename the Enterprise-C Suggestions welcome. Stephen Ratliff at Radford University email : sratliff@rucs2.sunlab.cs.runet.edu ANYTHING CAN HAPPEN (and just might) Newsgroups: alt.startrek.creative Path: newserv.ksu.ksu.edu!moe.ksu.ksu.edu!vixen.cso.uiuc.edu!howland.reston.ans.net!darwin.sura.net!hearst.acc.Virginia.EDU!ruacad!rucs!sratliff From: sratliff@rucs2.sunlab.cs.runet.edu (Stephen Ratliff) Subject: TNG Enterprized part 07 Message-ID: Organization: Radford University X-Newsreader: TIN [version 1.2 PL0] Date: Wed, 19 Jan 1994 15:52:04 GMT Lines: 77 It's finally here part 07 ====================================================================== E N T E R P R I Z E D by Stephen Ratliff --------------------------------------------------part 07------------ Chapter Six ^^^^^^^^^^^ Captain's Log STARDATE 37571.5 USS Enterprise NCC-1701-D stardrive Captain Jean-Luc Picard recording Having acoplished all of our objectives, we have met the Enterprise-C and are about to return to our time. The Enterprise-C shot forward unseen except for the alst second before time travel when it was surounded by sparks. The Federations leading design engineer was passing by in a small runabout. He was also at the helm when the Enterprise-D repeated the manuever. The Enterprises C&D decloaked. "Captain there is a battle going on to the starboard," Yarr said. "On Screen," Picard replied. A constution class starship was battling two romulan warships. "I think we have a problem," Ensign Ro said looking at the screen. "How so?" Picard said. "That's the Enterprise-A," Ros replied. "It's the starship in the Federation Starship museum." "Then we better make sure it gets there," Picard said. "Take us in Ro. Yarr as Riker to do the same." "He is already doing so," Yarr replied. "Ah, Mr Spock." "Spock analyst of the ships that just arrived," James T. Kirk asked. "There are no ships matching their desciption in our data banks," Spock said as the Enterprise-A took another hit. "However their markings identify them as the USS Enterprise NCC-1701-C and the USS Enterprise NCC-1701-D." "MR Checkov don't worry about the newcomers," Kirk ordered. "Fire phasers." Even as Kirk gave the order the romulans turned toward the Enterprises C&D. However the more advanced weapons and shields of the Galaxy class and Ambassitor class ships were more than a match for there assult. Ther Romulans were dispatched in short order. "Hail the other Enterprises, Uhura," Kirk ordered. "Both Enterprises responding," Uhura replied "Put them on screen," Kirk said. Captain Picard and Commander Riker appeared on the screen. "I am Admiral James T. Kirk of the Federation starship Enterprise NCC-1701-A. And you are?" "Captain Jean-Luc Picard of the Federation starship Enterprise NCC-1701-D. My first officer Commander Willaim T. Riker is presently in command of the Enterprise NCC-1701-C." Commander Riker nodded. "What are you doing in STARDATE 9530?" Kirk asked. "We took a wrong turn at STARDATE 37570 on our way back to STARDATE 47576," Picard replied. "I believe we can help you," Kirk responded. "Spock transmit the correct coarse speed weight formula." Spock got to work. "I assume you wish this incendent be classified." "Yes," Picard said, "If possisble forgotten." "I'll do my best," Kirk said "Enterprise-A out." -------------------------------------------------------------------- Next posting sometime in the next 4 days. Comments welcome and requested. parts 01-07 available via email Stephen Ratliff at Radford University email : sratliff@rucs2.sunlab.cs.runet.edu Next Posting : Why Sela thought her mother was dead. Newsgroups: alt.startrek.creative Path: newserv.ksu.ksu.edu!moe.ksu.ksu.edu!vixen.cso.uiuc.edu!howland.reston.ans.net!europa.eng.gtefsd.com!uunet!hearst.acc.Virginia.EDU!ruacad!rucs!sratliff From: sratliff@rucs2.sunlab.cs.runet.edu (Stephen Ratliff) Subject: Enterprized part 08 Message-ID: Organization: Radford University X-Newsreader: TIN [version 1.2 PL0] Date: Fri, 21 Jan 1994 21:06:22 GMT Lines: 90 ======================================================================= E N T E R P R I Z E D by Stephen Ratliff ----------------------------------------------------part 08------------ Chapter Seven ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ When the Enterprise-D arrived, Data checked a nearby beacon. after confirming that they weere indeed in STARDATE 46576, Picard ordered bothe Enterprises to decloak. Shortly after this was done the Enterprise-D detected an incoming Romulan warbird. "RED ALERT, BATTLE STATIONS," Picard ordered as the Romulan crossed into Federation space. "Lt. Yarr inform Starfleet of the Romulan incursion." "The Romulans are hailing us, sir," Tasha Yarr said. "On Screen," Picard said as Captain Sela appeared on screen. Tasha Yarr looked puzzled. "Captain Sela what brings you to Federation space." It suddenly dawned on Tasha that this woman was her daughter. "I have reason to believe that you have invaded Romulan space," Captain Sela replied. "Taken a Romulan warprize, captured 15 Romulan officers... and..." Sela trailed off as she finally noticed her mother standing at tactical. She went white. Taking advantage of Sela's break in aaccusations, Picard said, "I will gladly return your officers. But as for the Enterprise-C, retrieving stolen property is not a crime even on Romulas." "Captain, Perhaps Sela would be more comfortable if she came aboard," Tasha Yarr interrupted. "It would allow her to statisfy herself that the Romulan officers were well treated." "Excellent idea, Luietenant," Picard said. "Would you beam aboard Captain?" "Of Coarse, Sela Out." Tasha Yarr met her daughter in the transporter room. The first words out of her mouth were, "How come you are not dead?" "Lets compare notes," Tasha said. "I was beamed from the shuttle craft on STARDATE 37571 at about 0900 hours what happened to you after that?" "They had thrown me out of the shuttle," Sela said. "I hit a stalagtite and blacked out. The next thing I remember you were sitting by me as I woke up. A couple days later you took me in a clothes basket and tried to escape. I screemed, they captured us and killed you on the spot." "Daughter you have been had," Tasha said. "The put you in a holodeck and made you think that I hadn't suceeded." "Wait intill I get my hands on father!" Sela fummed. "Calm down Sela," Lt. Yarr said. "You've inherted the famous Yarr temper. Lets get your officers back into Romulan hands. Romulan Government will want to reward two of them. These two killed an officer each." She pointed to two names on the PADD she was carrying "Anyone I know?" Sela asked. "Just the parents of the girl the Captain left in command of the saucer section." As Yarr completed the statement The Romulan officers began arriving two security officer to each romulan. The officers were beamed abroad the Romulan warbird in silence. Finally It was just Sela, Tasha and a transporter operator again. "Mom, are you staying on the Enterprise-D," Sela asked "No, Worf is chief of security now and I don't want to subplant him," Tasha said. "I will problely be posted on the Renamed Enterprise-C." "Please write or send word to me if you can I don't want to have to go up against you," Sela said "I'll try," Tasha said. "Now chould you do a little mail delivery for the federation. A letter to Admiral Jeric's wife and daughter and to your father." "I'll try," Sela replied, "but I doubt that father will read it but the other letter will be well received." Sela stepped up on to the transporter disk and said, "Good by, Mom, entergize." As sela beamed out a tear chould be seen runing down he cheek. ----------------------------------------------------------------------- One more part and this story is done Sorry about the disjoinedness and a little bit to much craming thing in here but This is my first attempt at writing fiction. My Next Story (written over Christmas break) A Gul's Revenge will follow as soon as this one is complete. A promo follows the next post. Still looking for comments and suggestions Stephen Ratliff at Radford U. email: sratliff@rucs2.sunlab.cs.runet.edu Next Part : What ever happened to the saucer and the kids crew Conclusion Newsgroups: alt.startrek.creative Path: newserv.ksu.ksu.edu!moe.ksu.ksu.edu!vixen.cso.uiuc.edu!howland.reston.ans.net!europa.eng.gtefsd.com!uunet!hearst.acc.Virginia.EDU!ruacad!rucs!sratliff From: sratliff@rucs2.sunlab.cs.runet.edu (Stephen Ratliff) Subject: Enterprized part 09 Message-ID: Organization: Radford University X-Newsreader: TIN [version 1.2 PL0] Date: Sat, 22 Jan 1994 19:29:03 GMT Lines: 129 This is the final post of Enterprized. A promo for A Gul's Revenge will follow. And now the conclusion ==================================================================== E N T E R P R I Z E D by Stephen Ratliff --------------------------------------------------part 09----------- Chapter Eigth ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Captain's Log STARDATE 46573.72 USS Enterprise NCC-1701-D saucer section Marrissa Floras Recording We have arrived at Deep Space Nine. However it keeps cutting off our attempts to get premision to dock. "Is Deep Space Nine still not responding to our requests to dock," Marrissa asked. "Yes," Jay Gordon yawned. "Open a channel to Commander Sisko," Marrissa ordered. "I'll take it in my ready room. Patterson you have the bridge. Jay go get some sleep. You've been on this bridge for 15 hours." Jay hesitated. "Go to bed." Marrissa entered the ready room. She sat down behind the desk and actavated the desk screen. Commander Benjiman Sisko appeared on the screen. "This is Commander Sisko of Deep Space Nine," he said. "What are you doing interfering with commications. I am ..." "Commander, I suggest that you let me introduce myself before you try to scold me," Marrissa interrupted. "I am Marrissa Floras, Acting Captain, starship Enterprise saucer section. Now can we dock?" "Excuse my mistake, dock at upper pylon 2," Sisko said. "How did you get command of the Enterprise saucer section?" "The other crewmembers were needed on a mission with which they chould only take the stardrive section," Marrissa supplied. "I got command by my 21 minute kobayshi Maru time." "Very impressive. Just how old are you?" "12. The Arizona will arriving here soon with the Cardassian we captured on our way here." "You captured an Cardassian ship on your way here!" "Yes, Gul Ducat's. He should see what side of the broder he is on before he tries to capture ships." "Thanks for the imformation. The Arizona is on sensors now. DS9 out." Gul Ducat entered Commander Sisko's office. "Feeling homesick again?" Sisko asked. "No, thanks for asking," Ducat said. "I demand that the present command crew of the Enterprise saucer section be handed over to Cardassian for justice." "On what charges?" Commander Sisko asked. "Attacking a Cardassian warship." "I'm afraid I can't do that," Sisko smiled. "Especailly since they had every right to do so." "What rights?" "You were in Federation territory." "Navagational error. Not a reason to fire on a ship." "No, it isn't but I'm not finshed," Sisko returned. "You fired on them." "Accidental discharge." "You asked them to surrender," Sikso responed. "They refused. You fired again. They returned fire. Your ship was disabled. You deserve every thing you got right down to the the inscription 'I lost to a bunch of kids' on your hull. Now I suggest you and Cardassia better find a way to apologize for your tready vololations. Now I've got a party at Quark's for the Enterprise crew to attend." Commander Sisko left his office and Ops. Left behind him Gul Ducat pondered the mess he got him self into. Captain's Personal Log STARDATE 47576.1 USS Enterprise NCC-1701-C Commander William T. Riker recording Having arrived at DS9 2 hours ago I went to find young Marrissa to inform her of her parents deaths. I found her talking to Jake Sisko on the upper area of the Promenade. She walk a few paces away with me when I said I had something to tell her. When I informed her of her parents deaths she rushed down the promenade and back to her command. In the process she brushed me knocking me off balance. Chief O'Brien had been replacing the guard rails in the area and there was nothing to prevent me from falling on to the lower level. Quark, the operator of the local gambling assablishment, was walking below and I fell on him Both of Us spent an hour with Dr Bashir. Captain's Log Stardate 47576.1 USS Enterprise NCC-1701-D stardrive Captain Jean-Luc Picard Our journey to Deep Space Nine has been delayed. A Feringi trading vessel had a warp engine problem which required our assistance. -----------------T H E-------E N D------------------------------------ And Now a promo for +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ A G U L ' S R E V E N G E ----------------------------------- "Captain, hail from Deep Space Nine," Lt. Yarr said. "On Screen," Picard said. Commander Sisko appeared on the main veiwscreen. "What can I do for you Commander?" "The Cardassians are semding a dozen warships toward Bajor," Sisko said. "ETA 2 hours. You are the senior commander in the area." "Yarr, cloak us," Picard ordered. "What ship do we have? And do those ship have any problems?" "The Roanoke, our patrol ship this month; the Galaxy, which doesn't even have a skeleton crew; the Enterprise-C; the Arizona; the Surak, it's due to come in in 20 minutes for a quick supply stop and return to the Gamma Quad.; and your saucer section," Sisko said. A PADD was handed to him from off screen. "I've just been informed we, The United Federation of Planets Congress (reading from the PADD) declare war on the Cardassian Empire after attacks on Vulcan, Risa, Betazed and numerous starships." "So It has come to that has it," Picard said ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Coming soon to alt.startrek.creative Notes on Enterprized I know this isn't the usual place for it but this story is dedicated to my brother Phillip who told me that they should always go right back to the correct time. I hope you enjoyed Enterprized. As always coments welcome. Stephen Ratliff at Radford University email : sratliff@rucs2.sunlab.cs.runet.edu